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Naga!Loui x Reader

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(I tried my best to make the reader as gender neutral as possible so anyone can read this. Um...enjoy! >///w///< )


"Come on already...Please, just do what I say before I'll freak out." You growled quietly to yourself as you tried to make a fire for both getting some light in the dark jungle and for protecting yourself from nocturnal wild animals.

Earlier, you had been wandering with the tourist group to take some pictures of the beautiful jungle life, but as the group had been having a small break by a pond, you had gotten distracted by a pretty and colorful bird that wasn't quite interested to pose for your camera. You hadn't given up though as you followed the bird, but when you had finally gotten a good picture and got back to the pond, the group was gone. They didn't even seem to have noticed you missing from the group. And now you were all alone and lost in the jungle.

You smiled as a few sparks and smoke started to appear in the small pile of sticks and branches you had collected. As the fire started to grow and spread warmth close to you, you felt a lot more calmer and safer. You needed to think of a plan to get out of the jungle as soon as possible. Your thinking of different solutions were broken by the sound of a long and soft hiss coming from nearby, making you startled as you quickly got up to your feet as your eyes darted around after the source of the hissing sound. Was it a snake? It was very difficult to see in the dark and you didn't have a flashlight on you, but you did have your camera.

Quickly picking the camera up from your backpack, you set your camera to flash mode. You felt your heart beat strongly inside of your ribcage as it was dead quiet around you. Holding your breath for a moment, you took a picture into the darkness. A part of the jungle lit up for less than a second, but there was nothing there. You kept taking pictures towards different directions from your spot. You were sort of relieved that there was nothing there. Had you just imagined the hissing sound. You let out a shaky sigh to try and calm down. It wasn't until you heard the same hiss again, this time, coming from right above you. Fast as lightning, you turned your camera upwards and took another picture. Even though it was just for a brief moment, you saw a pale face with white ruffled hair and pair of yellow eyes staring right at you. You could tell it was a face of a young man, but he didn't really look so human. You let out a scream at the sight and backed quickly away, only to trip and fall on your back. The creature hissed in annoyance at the strong flash that blinded him for a second, but came back to his senses quickly as a long dark green and black striped snake tail dropped down from the trees and coiled around your legs before quickly hoisting you up into the trees, making you drop the camera which landed on the ground.

"No! Let me go!" You screamed and struggled to free youreself while you were upside down. You tried to kick the tail that was keeping your legs trapped, but to no avail as it was too strong. You were soon in the tree tops and face to face with this strange creature.

"Wassss it very necessssary to try and blind me like that?" He hissed more softly and somewhat amused, grinning at your surprised face.

"Wh-Who are you?! I demand that you put me down!" You exclaimed as you felt the blood reach your head, making you sort of dizzy.

"You're a feisssty one, aren't you? But I would have appreciated a more polite attitude from a human." He rolled his eyes a bit before putting you down on a thick branch. "The name'sss Loui."

You held tightly onto the branch to not let the dizziness make you fall to your death. You were very high up in a tree and couldn't do much.

"More polite attitude from me?! What about you?! Kidnapping me like that isn't really polite either!" You argued.

"Ah, you got me there." Loui said in a dramatic tone. "But I had the feeling you would have ran away from me if I greeted you in a more normal way. Don't want to risssk having you getting more lossst than you already are, do we?"

"How do you know that I'm lost?" You asked as you carefully sat up with your back against the tree's trunk, taking a better look at Loui as your eyes had gotten used to the darkness. As you thought, Loui wasn't really human. While his upper body looked human, his lower body was of a snake's body, a very long at that. You noticed that his coils were hanging at various branches in the tree. He was a naga, just like what the texts described nagas to be in the religion books, but slightly different. He didn't really act like a protector of waters and lakes.

"Well, the way you've been calling out for anyone and muttering to yourssself about where that village isss, sssorta gave me that idea. You're very far away from the nearessst village after all." He hissed softly as he studied you more curiously.

"D-Does that mean that you know the way to the village?" You asked, feeling hope inside for once after today. "Could you take me there?"

"Of courssse I can, buuuut..." He chuckled softly and got a sly look on his face. "I don't really know your name yet, plussss...I wouldn't really do it for free."

"It's _____." You said as you got a bad feeling about your situation with the naga. "Then...what do you want?"

You then noticed how close Loui had gotten to you, his face just inches away from yours. You involuntarily started to blush as you couldn't really back away because of the tree trunk behind you. Loui smiled seductively and flickered his long forked tongue against your cheek, making you twitch and get nervous.

"Nothing you need to worry about. I will take care of it all. You will only feel blissss.~" He purred and made you focus on his eyes by gently cupping your chin with his hand.

You weren't sure what to say or do, but you didn't have to think for very long as you noticed how his yellow eyes started to slowly change to a rippling pattern of different shades of purple rings that glowed in the dark. The rings caught your curiousity almost immediately and you barely noticed how your surroundings started to blurr in your vision. Somehow, this made you relax and feel much more safer.

"That'sss right...jusssst look and let yoursssself go. Let the ringsss claim you, ssssoothe you...entrancssse you." Loui hissed softly into your ear as he let his tail start to wrap around your waist and work itself up your body.

You felt nice shivers crawing over your spine as you felt his smooth and cool coils glide over your torso, trapping your bare arms comfortably. It was like a soft hug that never seemed to stop wrapping around you. It kept you warm and safe. You could feel how Loui placed his hands on your shoulders, rubbing them to help you fall deeper under his spell. Still, a part of you tried to resist as you tried to find your words, but it was as difficult as finding a snowman in the thickest fog.

"L-Loui...? I...I..." You tried to protest, but the words disappeared as soon as they were formed in your thoughts, getting drowned by the purple rings.

"Sssshhhhhh...No need to talk...or think...Jusssst let me take care of you for now. Let your worriesss go and embrace the blisssss." Loui smiled before kissing your lips deeply, holding your face in his hands as his coils stopped right below your shoulders.

Your mind completely gave in as you finally fell under Loui's hypnosis. You could see nothing but purple rings for now. It all felt so good and relaxing. You thought you could feel Loui tilt your head a bit to the side before you felt him teasingly brushing his lips against your neck, making you shiver greatly and letting out a soft moan.

Loui tried however to find the perfect spot on your neck to bite you to take some of your precious blood. After all, he was a vampire naga. It had been awhile since he had encountered a human to drink blood from, so he wanted to savour every moment with you. He wouldn't kill humans though, only take a small amount of blood from them. When he had found the perfect spot to drink from on your neck, he slowly sank his fangs into your soft skin. Since you were under his hypnosis, you couldn't feel any pain at all, only pleasure. Hearing you gasp softly, he started to slowly suck out your life juice from your blood system

It all felt like a loving kiss to you. Completely unaware that you were having your blood taken, you smiled softly and relaxed even deeper. You felt Loui's hand supporting your head, his fingers caressing your hair softly at the back of your head. As the time passed by, you started to feel weak and drained of your energy, so sleepy. It didn't take long before your vision darkened and you slipped into a dreamless sleep.

The next thing you knew, you woke up in your own tent with your backpack and everything. Had it all been a dream? You were so confused, it had all felt so real, but you didn't have much memory of what had happened. But you did remember that you had taken a picture of the naga. You picked up your camera, seeing that it was fortunately still whole. You turned it on and looked through all of the pictures you had taken yesterday. The one you had taken of Loui was still there, but he wasn't in the picture. There were only leaves and branches.

The end~
My gosh...Why does inspiration hit me so suddenly. *flops* XwX Nuff said.

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Bluemoon9628's avatar
Wow just wow
*sleepy*